Your paper was good. I especially liked how you wrote about poetry being similar to the internet because it is informal. Overall, it was well written and easy to understand.
the paper flows very nicely. I like how you used the many sources from our readings, and the points made about formal vs informal writing. I might add a little more about the benefits of the internet though.
Methods- asks a question at the beginning and uses the paper as an answer. Shows points of view of all people. Materials- articles from class and database Key Words- "The technology that is present in our society today forces us to write so much more frequently. With all of this practice, people are surely becoming better writers. I know so many intelligent people that use the Internet on a regular basis to obtain information." makes a very string point. Uses- shows views of class writer, and then his own view as well Limits- paper really just defines the opinions of the writers, they already are known.
Your paper was good. I especially liked how you wrote about poetry being similar to the internet because it is informal. Overall, it was well written and easy to understand.
ReplyDeletethe paper flows very nicely. I like how you used the many sources from our readings, and the points made about formal vs informal writing. I might add a little more about the benefits of the internet though.
ReplyDeleteMethods- asks a question at the beginning and uses the paper as an answer. Shows points of view of all people.
ReplyDeleteMaterials- articles from class and database
Key Words- "The technology that is present in our society today forces us to write so much more frequently. With all of this practice, people are surely becoming better writers. I know so many intelligent people that use the Internet on a regular basis to obtain information." makes a very string point.
Uses- shows views of class writer, and then his own view as well
Limits- paper really just defines the opinions of the writers, they already are known.